Running quickly, his feet strike the ground in a natural rhythm. The boy wasn't born to run; however, adrenaline from fear creates a surprising effect. His rate of breaths increase successively, each breath racing the previous in duration and occurence. His sudden frown indicates that he cannot keep this up much longer; a short burst of energy is one thing, but endurance is another. The only remnants of moisture, on his forehead, is already starting to dissipate. He is getting tired, and his rhythm is breaking.
The feet of his shadow now kisses the head of the beast's and he starts to lose not only his body, but his mind as well. He is losing confidence and self-control; doubt of survival edges closer.
He slows to a stop; the boy has reached a dead end, a cliff. A slight smirk appears on the beast's face, it's close to victory over its prey. It's hungry for a meal and has found this boy to be an excellent candidate for breakfast.
A sudden gurgle in the boy's stomach creates an irony of a sort. The organ screams out for fuel; however, it itself will become fuel for another.
Under his breath, he says his last words, "Ah F***".
The feet of his shadow now kisses the head of the beast's and he starts to lose not only his body, but his mind as well. He is losing confidence and self-control; doubt of survival edges closer.
He slows to a stop; the boy has reached a dead end, a cliff. A slight smirk appears on the beast's face, it's close to victory over its prey. It's hungry for a meal and has found this boy to be an excellent candidate for breakfast.
A sudden gurgle in the boy's stomach creates an irony of a sort. The organ screams out for fuel; however, it itself will become fuel for another.
Under his breath, he says his last words, "Ah F***".
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3 Comments:
You love the Semi-Colon, don't you?
I count at least 3 grammatical//spelli-cal errors.
Not too bad.
Yeah, didn't have time to proofread it over, ahem, like you noticed i was at work
You dont need "however" after a semi-colon.
On the other hand, what is with this scary blogging?
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